Showing Its Origins

I’m running the NaNovel through critique group right now, and even though I made several passes through it and tried to flesh it out, it’s still kind of rushed. It used to feel very much like… if you’ve ever heard Jaws, the screenreading software for the visually impaired, it used to feel like that. It’s not so bad now, but it’s still…
Well, you can still tell it’s a NaNovel: “Can’t stop, will lose momentum. Can’t stop, must finish wordcount. Can’t stop, clowns will eat me. Clowns will eat me!”
Anyway, my crit group is most awesome. Now I just need more time to rewrite!